finished/draft

1. I believe a workshop draft is pretty much just a collection of ideas. But i also think everyones style of writing can alter that. i personally like to make my first draft very neat and formal, as to not have much to change when it comes to the final draft. i know people who like to just throw down all their ideas in a very sparatic manner, then change the sentances and ideas alllllll around when they come up to their final draft. if someone looked at my drafts and final copies, they probably wouldnt see much difference, becauase thats the way i like to write.
2. If i read essay R and was asked to give feedback to the author, i would say it was an okay starting point. there are alot of good topics in this essay to expand upon and research further. obviously the writer would have to focus more on certain points, such as the differences in time periods of wrestling, and not playmate female wrestlers. i would tell him that he would need to reorder alot of his ideas to both make the essay sound better, and be more effective.